It’s so ‘bleh’ » CJN:Preview 2 (revision 0)

chronical-of-jaele-nistra-2.pdf

The second unrevised portion of the novel I am working on… if I keep releasing at this pace I’ll catch up to myself real soon… that is if I continue working at my present pace. Well it is gritty and rude, lots to be done to get it ‘ok’ even but it gets the plot points out there which is all the first write is for, right? Tell me what you think, changes you could see, continuity errors, anything really would be awesome. Well tata.